Preliminary Task

Evaluation 

In terms of things we can improve, there were a few shots that we could have improved. There is one shot towards the end of the film (0.52 seconds) where Lara's face is not in focus, yet the background is. In the final shot we also completly overlooked the fact that Lara/ the student left the bag and her pencil case on the table. Another mistake like that starts at 0.11 seconds. One shot shows Lara opening the folder so it is horizontal on a blank page, however in the next shot it shows a different page and the folder is at a diagonal. Also at 0.32 seconds we used an over the shoulder shot focusing on Lara however, we see Mr Conly walk past the window then the shot cuts to the next shot and he has gone.

I feel as though our shots could have been better and smoother but considering the time we had to complete this and the fact that it is only the preliminary task, I am very happy with our work.