This draft includes more of the shots, ranging from Day 1 at Bir Zekreet to Day 3 outside Josh's house. In this edit we have background music, the titles at the beginning and the contrasting shots of me in black and white. In this edit I am not sure that the music works as it gets a little bit tedious towards the end. Obviously this is just a draft and is not finished.
Our targets for our next draft are:
- Aim for 2 minutes of content
- Try to get a full draft, using more shots and getting to the end.
- Incorporate titles such as "directed by..." etc
- Focus on the pace of the film, make sure something is intriguing and that we don't lose the audiences interest
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